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Jun 15, 2007
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Bilgola Plateau re-worked
A succession of headlands fades mistily,
soft europeanly
so unlike our fiercely factual australian light.
I expect a dragon to swoop from the clouds,
or at least a viking longship to sweep into view
they don’t
perhaps its best that way.
Australia’s spirits are strange beyond belief.
And I choose not to mess with them.
— weirdelf, Jun 15, 2007
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weirdelf
19 years 1 month ago
Joe
weirdelf
19 years 1 month ago
ok, if you want to get tough
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