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cinderella

Cinderella :Part 1  
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In a land full of fame and fortune,
There was a girl who had pain and was tortured.
She always scrubbed the floors,
Curtsy and open all the doors.
Polishing and soothing,
And always keep moving.
Making warm milk,
Cleaning the stains off the silk.
Brushing, rubbing, and grooming,
Making clothes by looming.
Putting trees in the big garden,
To speak she always says excuse me or pardon.
Always cook breakfast, lunch, and dinner.
When guest arrive she has to smile like a happy grinner.
After every meal cleans and sets the table.
Check on all the barn animals in the stable.
She was not rich or had a lot of money.
All the jokes her sisters say were not funny
.
She cleans up the horse and cow manure,
Hoping that this Job will get done sooner.
One day everyone was invited to the big ball.
But her sisters said she was not allowed at all.
During that day she went to the pond,
and spotted a lady with a wand.
She collected some water in a bucket,
and accidently dropped her locket.

 
Cinderella :Part 2
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The lady by the pond,
saw at the girl then accidently dropped her wand.
Then she saw the girls crying and fret,
And then the two ladies met.
The lady said, " Why a sad face dear."
She said, " I can’t go to the ball with these tears".
" Wanted to dress up and go,
But I do not have any fancy clothes".
" My sisters just left and go,
and they left me here all alone".
" I wish I had a beautiful yellow dress,
but all I have is to clean a lot of mess".
The lady said, " I will help you with your problem".
Then the girl stopped sobbing.
"How can you do that" asked that girl.
" My wand has all the magic in the world".
She picked up her wand,
Right next to the pond.
Then she said," Bibbity Bobbity Boo".
All of the sudden everything went boom.
The girl’s dress was yellow,
And there was a chariot with horse and fellow.
She went in the chariot and thank-you and bye,
and left without a single sigh.
On the highest mountain she would go,
without a tear or woe.
 
Cinderella :Part 3
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There up the mountain was a tower.
The sundial was passing hour to hour.
The girl was really so excited.
She was also very enlightened.
While she was sitting in her seat,
She was thinking how the Prince and her will meet.
The horses were really smelly.
There was a funny feeling in her belly.
One more mile to the tower with the Prince.
The girl said," I have been waiting for this ever since".
There she arrived at the tower.
She did not act like a coward.
Then she stepped and looked inside.
It was all tall and wide.
She saw the prince and queen.
One of the most beautiful things she ever seen.
All the lights were shown down.
The music was a beautiful sound.
When the Prince saw her cute face,
He ran like he was in a race.
He staring at her for a while.
Then she and the Prince went down the aisle.
Everyone looked at the Prince and her.
The girl said," May I Has this dance Sir".
The prince and her danced all night,
Then her sisters had a fight.
Cinderella :Part 4
 
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One sister said, "Who is that girl".
Another said,"She must be the prettiest girl in the world".
The clock had hit night to 11:59.
The girl thought she had lots of time.
Then she saw her sisters go and leave.
Then she thought that they will kill me.
"I need to go now", she said to the Prince.
This has been the happiest moment ever since.
She ran out the building with a sad face.
The Prince did not run like he was in a race.
She went through the back entrance in her house.
Then her sisters came with a big angry pout.
The girl had to change,
then she got all rearrange.
Her sisters came all mad and slapping.
They did not know what happened.
In the morning everyone got an announcement.
Then her sisters started pouting.
A man came up to the door with slipper,
And handed out a piece of paper.
It read however could fit this slipper.
Will see the Prince and is the keeper.
Her sisters tried to fit the little shoe,
Then Cinderella put it on and it fitted to.
It was a perfect match to her feet.
Then the Prince and her went to meet.

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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

clever

way to make people read it, add a comment!
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Prototype

18 years 9 months ago

well

that was better than i was expecting. Cinderella is not one of my favorites stories, but i enjoy to read your cute little version.
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orgami

18 years 9 months ago

happy and yet sad

beautiful remake on an old childhood beloved loved reading this another well loved poem of orgamis ..Orgami!..