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Region, Country: USA - Illinois, USA

Favorite Poets: Shakespeare, Emily Dickinson, Edgar Allen Poe

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 10 months ago

its about me, not you

wow, this kicked up so much old relationship stuff for me, really powerful. You can't control your readers relationship with your work, once you put it out there its out. My reaction to this may have no relation to your intent but I can tell you it was, although unpleasant, worthwhile. A new perspective on my own past. Thank you cheers Jess
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barbsdad2003

18 years 10 months ago

Wow!

You tell this amazingly well, and I'm appropriately impressed. Enriching. Thanx, Chuck