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Jun 17, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Woman

Woman
(A Native American View of Woman)
By Larry Hart
© January 9, 2003
 
Woman, Thank you we owe so much to you.
Woman, Mother of Man whose fears are calmed under
Your gentle hand.
 
Women so brave and true all goodness flows from you.
 
From the moment of birth your heart was touched by the
Great Spirit making you one
With Our Mother Earth.
 
    

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18 years 10 months ago

Appreciated your Poem

I enjoyed the sweet sentiment. I'm at odds with this poem, it's gorgeous yet somewhat generic(which takes away from the poem a bit). The first stanza "speaks" to me however the second seems a bit coated. It does't evoke any emotion, just another pretty but mundane line. It's almost like a filler, there to just take up space. Anyways enough of my negativity, I'm trying to impose my vision on to you and your work which isn't cool so ignore half of whatever I just said Thaks for the read Peace