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Jun 10, 2007
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Divination of an African Sunrise
Dancing Trails
rise up
with sweet smelling perfumes,
shaping and recanting
in all different guises.
Beautiful plumes
dart through the air
spiraling to
the bigger picture.
Divining in light.
Divining in dream.
You came to me
in sweet smelling perfumes
unfurling mist,
dancing in trails,
racing into ash.
— Conect11, Jun 10, 2007
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weirdelf
19 years 1 month ago
Real poetry
Conect11
19 years 1 month ago
you wanted to see something you never saw before...
barbsdad2003
19 years 1 month ago
I Love This One
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