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Lie To Me

Lie to me pain
so I have to feel
lie to me love
so I have to stain
lie to me lies
so I won’t know my pain
lie to me lies
so I won’t have to stain

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

This is dirty, nasty and good

I thought at first the first line was a mis-spelling "Lie to my pain" then I realised not. You are bone bruisingly honest. Few people can be so.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

yeay, absinthe, it's legal here

but much over-rated. It's just a more mellow and... cognicent way of being drunk. Not hallucinogenic at all. Take it from me, I am an expert. The only reason my brain is not totally fried is that I have always taken vitamin supplements and looked after my diet.
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Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

ooh

illegal here, I did almost move to Sydney a few years back, now I know why, lol.
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

hey dude

don't let the wormwood dialogue take away from your poem. it's just the chat room hasn't started yet.