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The Wave
The ripple on the horizon,
the imperceptible start.
The wave comes closer,
the wave reaches higher.
Now it’s upon him,
upon the tiny surfer.
High the wave reaches,
it towers over,
it gains a crown,
a boiling white crown,
and this great monster,
cold, cruel, curving,
picks up the surfer
and is smitten a blow,
a great white gash across its chest.
In attack the wave rears higher, higher,
higher still.
The surfer rides destruction safe to shoulder.
The wave curls over,
further, further.
Up the wave
Up the the wave the surfer strives,
striking at the waves great heart,
that roaring murderous great heart.
Along the wave,
back to the curl,
in the curl to strike the heart.
The surfer rides out,
unscathed but weary,
weary all through,
though his mind is alert.
Down the wave, another great gash,
up the wave,
beating, beating,
beating the wave
till it fights still harder.
Yet the wave seems conquered,
yet the wave seems smaller
and the surfer grows careless
and the fury unleashes!
It crushes the surfer,
it envelopes his board
and the surfer is no more,
and his board is but pieces,
pieces of rubble.
The crowd on the shore,
horrified,
petrified
at the sight of the surfer,
lost to the sea.
Comments
Mistyone
18 years 11 months ago
good write
weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
and you are a very good writer
Conect11
18 years 10 months ago
you
weirdelf
18 years 10 months ago
Many thanks!
Mark
18 years 3 months ago
Just alone working your way
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
I drowned in the experiencing of it,
Mark
18 years ago
Sounds like
poewriter58
17 years 7 months ago
Jess
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Jess,
Mark
16 years 3 months ago
twelve
poewriter58
16 years 3 months ago
Jess
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
Oooooooh 12, wicked write,
weirdelf
16 years 3 months ago
ta mark, julie, vickie
Monalisa
16 years 3 months ago
Very cool.
weirdelf
16 years 3 months ago
YW, glad you enjoyed it