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weirdelf

Jun 10, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Rhyming senryu

Five rhymes for the times
Seven vodkas, ice and limes
Our crimes for five dimes

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Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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18 years 11 months ago

I lied.

There are only 4 rhymes. Will try to do better next time

C

18 years 11 months ago

LIAR!

you're lucky Australia is already a penal colony! lol I also believe I commented on this elsewhere... it's still good, though.

18 years 9 months ago

that's it! Eureka!

the 5th rhyme, five crimes for five dimes thanks mark cheers, Jess

B

18 years 9 months ago

Short and Sweet!

And I like rhymes and times and limes and dimes. Although by last count I just don't accumulate enough of the dimes for these costly times. Thanx, Chuckles

I

18 years 6 months ago

Brother could ypou spare time ...

for a rhyme about a dime for a change.

O

orgami

16 years 9 months ago

Thirsty for change

Dimes can buy Limes but cant cure scurvy drank a little drink and i feel quite nervy Sweet poem here from the way long!

16 years 9 months ago

Way long!

thanks for looking back into my distant past feeling somewhat nervy myself Cheers, Jess

16 years 9 months ago

I can feel a headache coming

I can feel a headache coming on vodka does that to me but this poem is really good Jess loved it and I had a little laugh at the penal colony comment above LOL ... if they only knew eh ? ;) love Jayne x x