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wolfycat
wolfycat
Apr 30, 2007 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

I Follow You

Mere words cannot express the love and acceptance
You have brought to my longing heart.
This is not the rule game that I follow.
This is not a ‘religious’ facade.
I follow You,
The Lover of my soul.
For You have made me whole.
4/30/07 CMH

— wolfycat, Apr 30, 2007

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wolfycat

wolfycat

19 years 2 months ago

Thanks!!

Thanks for your comments on what I am trying to do here. I have dabbled with writing since I was very young 'on and off.' A lot of things keep me busy, though I'm trying to concentrate on writing so as to improve as much as possible.
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the_alleycat

19 years 2 months ago

Your Write

I really could feel the words that you wrote. and that is what it is all about.. yes indeed.. The Alleycat www.isound.com/alleycat_va
wolfycat

wolfycat

19 years 2 months ago

Thank You.

I appreciate so much your commenting on my poem. Thank you. Wolfycat
wolfycat

wolfycat

19 years 2 months ago

Question

I have a page where I write to thank the 'One' who has made me whole. You probably would not care for it and that is alright, but if you want to read where I am coming from, let me know and I will direct you there. I do not push what I write on anyone and I sincerely appreciate you reading and commenting on my work. Wolfycat
wolfycat

wolfycat

19 years 2 months ago

Burned

You do not even know me.It is amazing to me that you would compare me with him. It is not my fault that you have some kind of anger against every person that you do not agree with, especially people that you perceive to believe in Jesus Christ. Oh, shame on me...I guess I was not politically correct. Shame on you JS. I suppose though, that you will, in a very sarcastic way, choose some cutting, rude way to tell me that I am a fool.... and blah, blah, blah....and so it goes on and on and on..... Get over it and live your life and in the future-if you would like to comment on something that I wrote-keep your personal belief system out of it and I will do the same. Oh, excuse me-did I say belief?? And how do you expect people to not comment on the fact that you have no belief since you portray that fact so well in your writings????

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