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Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Complete in darkness
Alone at last
Just music and
Memories of the past
So many regrets
All the pain
So many tears
Falling again
Around and around
Where does it end
Up and down
How did it begin
The truest of love
Ripped from the heart
Forever fated
To be apart
Beneth my feet
The world crumbles
Inside my head
The voices rumble
Beside me you were
Supposed to stand
Now the darkness
Even conceals your hand
All alone
In darkness lost
So very high
Did true love cost
My heart and soul
My body and mind
Forever together
We will be intertwined
Slip on someone else
Smile, laugh, shine,
To hide, to cower,
While losing what’s mine
Shhhhh, she’s resting
The screaming ceased
So beautiful, so sad
Never to know peace
Alone in the darkness
With music and memories past
Complete in darkness
Alone at last,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

Ice I love the honest purity of feeling in your work

A constructive comment. You use rhyme well but it can impede choice of words and imagery. May I suggest you read a lot of poetry, Gerard Manley Hoplins, Dylan Thomas (one of my all time favourites) and e.e. cummings to name a few. Also you are not alone and your works may have more relevance to others if you tried writing in the third person. Cheers
I

IcePrincess

18 years 11 months ago

Third Person you say????

Hmmmm. I don't recall ever writing anything in third person. Well, maybe my poem for Zack. I have read alot of poetry, just never studied it formally. This sparks my interest, I will give it a try and see what happens. Eternity and a day, that is how long true love lasts.