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"BRUJO"

"Brujo"
 
For the Bujo happy were nights when trees shadowed by moonlight
gave no residence to ghostly visitors.
 
Joyous moments when passing from waking into
Orpheus’s gentle embrace.
 
Those moments were longed for…yearned for.
Not unlike an addict searching for their daily fix.
 
Terrible were nights when dead perched in skeletal trees
shrieking their derision, scorn, like harpies.
 
Poets long moldering in graves forgotten had not powers,
Strong enough to keep his shades at bay.
 
These were the nights when they would have such long discourse,
As to make a parliamentarian weep.
 
Wants, desires, cry’s pitiful, for one more moment’s extension could not,would not suffice.
 
Yet, they would flock seeking absolution for past sins.
Angry at living souls for living when they could no longer.
 
Yet as nights would wind relentlessly forward they would drift,
Drift towards some forgotten abattoir, to hide once more from living truth.
 
He would hasten their stumbling steps with poems magical.
Poems that captured moments illusive, rare.
 
No matter the eve’s wearing presence upon his brow.
Those thought-worn lines would ease as he read Cervantes.
 
To be a gallant about a lady’s honor was a fine fiction.
Resting his soul in Sancho Panza’s care.
 
In repose, regain strength for another eve of relentless bickering.  
Cursed with a Brujo’s dark worldly visions.
 
El Final
 
(c)-DS Baker

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Conect11

18 years 11 months ago

I think...

my first impression is that I think this poem rather than feel it, that there is alot of intellect behind it, but I haven't caught passion from it. That's fine, many poets and writers (ie., Ayn Rand) take that approach. Still, I felt like I was observing someone more than learning / feeling from them, like I was a dispassionate observer.
dbaker

dbaker

18 years 11 months ago

Brujo

Thanks for the opinion. I guess it is an observational piece. It was written for a very good friend of mine. He actually has the name of Myrlin. His parents are ex-hippys. But it seemed to have summed up his passion for his mother's spanish culture. Thank you for taking the time to read it. Work, stretch, take risks, visualize your future. Become the poet you have always longed to be. All that is needed is honest effort.-DSB
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

Your poetry

I have read the poems "The Devil's Dance" "Blank Canvas" "Sierra Nevada" "BRUJO" and I love them, love your passion, intellect and interesting twist. cheers Weirdelf
weirdelf

weirdelf

18 years 11 months ago

p.s.

I also understand the agony of writers block