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The Wind

The wind rustles the leaves
that overlook my place
 
A beautiful sky peers
in the distance
 
Lost but not looking
for the right way
 
The wind rustles the leaves
that look upon me
 
A beautiful sky
that lingers in place
 
Lost, but still looking
for my right way

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Mistyone

18 years 11 months ago

thanks

thanks for your input. I am glad you were honest.