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Just Sitting Here.......

Just sitting here thinking…….
What’s the right thing to do?
I could think of nothing more,
Than to write this poem for you
You are a great friend to me
No one could ask for better…….
We’ve been through thick and through thin,
And through every kind of weather
I know that I hurt you, and
Regret causing you pain……
I thank the Lord for your forgiveness,
And ecstatic that we are friends again
We have lots of fun…..
You’re always good at making me laugh…..
We look forward to the future,
And far beyond the past
Thank you for understanding me…..
And understanding I think outside the box……
Thanks for becoming my Hound Dog,
And letting me be your Fox.
We’ll be friends
From now until forever
True friendship like ours
Can endure any kind of weather
Thank you for being there for me
When I need a listening ear….
And when I need a shoulder
You always seem to be near.
We will always and forever
Be the best of Friends
It’s you I know I can count on
Until the bitter end.

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Mark

Mark

18 years 12 months ago

Raw truth

Hi now . . . well raw truth for me is I like this poem. I found the rhythm off a little in some places >We've been through thick and through thin< sttarted me kind of stumbling not really sure maybe it is the use of >through< two times in the same line (for this poem) I'm not sure you want to use dots the way you do. You might want to use them consistantly like dot dash dot dash dot ( . . .) when the thoughts may continue and if the website will allow it lol Just some ideas for you :-) In the end it is really your decisions and your poetry. Thanks for the pleasure, Mark