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Dark Star

The raining light reached desolately
within the shadow of her full moon.

And as the stars cried conspicuously
she brazed my heart with her silence.
The wind pondered upon a sad melody of enchantments for the dark star.
However she remained silent without
remorse.
All the constellations within heaven
gathered to give her the last prayer.
O dark star
God shall miss your
Light.

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billy

18 years 10 months ago

great poem

what a terrific poem i really enjoyed reading its creativity and beauty----------nicely done FANTASTIC
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Conect11

18 years 10 months ago

yeah

kinda dug this. Shame you haven't been around here in awhile. Mark
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the_alleycat

18 years 10 months ago

The Alleycat Entertainment

I am sorry that I have not been around. I must pay my bills..so I stay on the road. I am a music artist and do not have much time between gigs.. Thank you for thinking of me I am The Alleycat