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vijibenhur
Apr 30, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My shadow

when i walked through the lonely moon light
i remembered my sweet hearts words,
saying i will be by your side all the time.
my heart became heavy when i thought
those words were just empty words..
suddenly i heard my sweet hearts voice
calling my name by my side
then only this stupid heart realized
she is by my side as my shadow..

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19 years ago

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Were you saying the memory of her will always be with you even if ya'll are not together? If thats what you mean't I had to read it twice just to get that. At first I was a bit confused, wondering what was the point but then it dawned on me and your brilliant. Incognido and kinda indiscretet(excuse the sp). I like it this length, well I', content with it but I would alwso like to read more. Be more descriptive and create lots of imagges. Remember you are painting a canvas with words and you wan't a Picasso however here is the outlining of a Picasso. Thanks for the read -brit