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Mar 01, 2007
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We sat in a circle
All together but still in our own little safe corners
Perfectly designed worlds meant to replace this one
Adjacent to me sat this girl
Arms and legs scarred,hiding them were futile,hair thin, face gaunt
Her face said it all before her low voice diffused into the room's atmosphere
Her past experiences,her mistakes.
She focused on those;the mistakes that shamed her.
I looked at her and suddenly wondered what was the purpose of me being there
I wanted to comfort her and say," You did nothing wrong, all you did was live."
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weirdelf
18 years 11 months ago
Give it a title