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Fountain of Youth

Fountain of Youth
I live vicariously through your youthful eyes.
Each thing you learn is a new exciting surprise.
With every bump and scrape,
I feel your pain each time you ache.
I was just as excited about your first kiss.
I felt the disappointment each time you swung and missed.
You are my fountain of youth.
I even kept your very first tooth.
Wanting your life to be better than the one I had.
Having enjoyable moments being your dad.
Again, I am young if only in my mind.
Your experences take me where my body leaves me behind.

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joethecrow

19 years 2 months ago

Thanks for the feedback my

Thanks for the feedback my friend. I don't really like that poem just wanted to post a few things.  You are correct, go with what ya know.  I am not allowed to post the poems from my books so the one I can are not that great but perhaps can make the a bit better thanks again.  Joe

 

 

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