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Feb 13, 2007
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we should catch the rain
All too soon old age, comes pounding at the door
We can't go back and what is left, won't give us any more
It is a single journey, can't return and go again
We cannot right the wrongs, which echo in the end
It seems a bit unfair, to learn along the way
The knowledge needed then, comes some later day
There are so many roads, we traveveled getting here
The map was flawed, the compass wasn't clear
Too many times we lost our way, not knowimg till the end
But knowing that today, can't fix the wrong back then
The many spears and arrows, we hurled along the way
Though drenched in all our sorrow, belong to yesterday
Could I return and stand your place, the arrows would be mine
I'd spread my quilty arms and keep you safe behind
Love comes all too soon in life, it falls on us like rain
and in between the drops, the sting of hurt and pain
We learn to use umbrellas; the rain rolls off the side
then looking back we see the road, where all the rain has died
We see too many arrows, that tell us where we've been
The rain is gone and we don't know, if it will come again
I can't go back to where it fell, life won't tell me how
Lifes a single journey and all it gives is now
Today the whisper lingers, your arrows hit the mark
and all your sorrow can't remove an arrow to the heart
So sad to find the answer which I needed then, today
I should have traded arrows, for umbrellas every day
Should have turned them to the rain, spread them all around
because the way to use umbrellas, is to turn them upside down.
Comments
Cathy
19 years 2 months ago
Sometimes
Sometimes I wish that I could go back to things.. To have just one more chance..
Cathy
Cathy
19 years 2 months ago
Thinking
I had to come back again and read over this poem once more.. maybe it is that i am in a new mindset this afternoon or maybe just more attention to it.. I am not sure.. Either way though.. Though I do you that you can not go back and change thing.. And feel that though many people do that this is not what out life should about.. It shod be about making the most out of everything in our lives.. for us as well as others.. However.. Though we can not go back and change the things in the past.. we can change now.. and by changing now we can change then and make up for i t... we just have to be willing to do this and do it with a open m ind, heart , and forgiveness for ourselves as well as others..
Cathy
alan
19 years 2 months ago
changing things
Prototype
18 years 8 months ago
Hey