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Flames

 The flames are dying

 


               Let me dance in your dreams
              Enshroud me in your midnight
         Let those sapphire hues adorn my breast
        Breathe your vapourous essence in my chest
                            ~
       Your cobolt eyes are the window to a simpler place
        Where shadows of time are fading upon your face
              Let me feel the heat of your warmth
           The blue passionate flames are slowy dying
             Burning deep inside, my soul is crying
                             ~
            Let me be your all, your everything
            Let me be the one to lay beside you
             Take these dreams i've fantizied
                              ~
                Make them real, no consequence,
                  Hold my heart in your hands
           Whisper your dreams in this moment's land
               Let me kiss your honeysuclke lips
                              ~
        Make me forget the world and all that I would miss
    For I would show you the bursting feeling, I hide inside
          Feel it as my fingers trace over your essence
            You would know passion's pressence.
                               ~
Amanda Jiardina 2006

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Cathy

19 years 3 months ago

Awesome

Awesome write there Amanda.. I really like love poems like this.. They to me just make you close your eyes and say.. aahhhh. Because they are romantic.. Cathy
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Cherie

19 years 3 months ago

nice write

true to your romantic self...mmm so nice! We need love once passion settles...a perfect plea for this! "Loving is so short. Forgetting is so long."- Pablo Neruda Cherie
Mark

Mark

19 years 3 months ago

OK

You got a deal !!