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LEAKER of the HOUSE

maga-mike is a johnson, I jest
the kind decent people detest
he's a sick, twisted prick
his own bitch wouldn't trick
and a sick, drippy, limp one at best

About This Poem

Last Few Words: not sure about the word "trick" here. Can it be used as a verb? I mean, in that frame?

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Lake Simcoe Canada

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, E.B. Browning, Theodor Seuss Geisel,

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