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May 27, 2023
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Reservoir
You’re my reservoir of all the things
I promised you
And couldn’t do
My little source of rotten hope
You overflow
With all we’ve had
To undergo
And all the shame
Of such an ineffective love
As mine
To run you dry
— Renee Willier, May 27, 2023
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Last Few Words: I’m not really looking for feedback, just community.
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
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Breakinglogic
3 years 1 month ago
"my little source of rotten
"my little source of rotten hope" is very catchy and rhythmic. I like the theme and, and the brevity.
Geezer
3 years 1 month ago
What kind of...
community is that?
~ Geezer.
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