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Jun 29, 2022
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The man bearing a broken hand
The deaf
and muted man
bounded to a
broken hand .
Is drawn into
this world
that can
never fully
understand.
Leaving him as
the single strand
of sand .
Lying along the
blackbird beach
of belittlement .
— Edward nigma, Jun 29, 2022
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Edward nigma
4 years ago
My inspiration
https://youtu.be/kRTaduMffrY
Jackweb
4 years ago
DISABILITY!
Having to adapt for a person's disability or them having to adapt and use coping mechanisms does not stop it being a relatively normal life.
Edward nigma
4 years ago
Well true
My inspiration was the movie called the heart is a lonely hunter
https://youtu.be/pF-r1aOD6Vc
Which is based of the book of the same name .
One
4 years ago
E.Nigma
We all have issues that we need to work around to live as comfortably as we can. It's what is inside us that makes us. Our mind & soul drives us, we just sometimes get stuck inside a vessel that needs extra attention.
I'm at work & can't access the links you've provided so my comment is based solely on the written piece so I could be off with my response.
"Lying along the
blackbird beach
of belittlement"
I believe this represents all of us, it's just how we deal with it that makes us who we are.
Nice job.
One.
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