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Dec 28, 2015
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ABOUT SERPENTS AND THINGSSS edit
ABOUT SERPENTS AND THINGSSS
like a cobra you slither
in high grass
hidden from sight, hissing
your sibilants,
dancing your dance
of seduction
trying to mesmerize
the senses
and confuse the mind:
before you strike.
but I know who you are
and I know your lies.
you have called my name
many times
but my soul is diamond
and gold and will fly
with the wind when
my flesh turns cold.
— Geremia, Dec 28, 2015
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wesley snow
10 years 5 months ago
That's better.
This was inspirational.
Geremia
10 years 5 months ago
Yes, it is good, isn't it?
Yes, it is good, isn't it?
thank you,
joe