Nichole

Member since April 13, 2011

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11 Poems

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Con Artist

Posted Feb 24, 2012 · 21 lines · 5 critiques

Con artist

I'm not the Con artist you made me to be,
You just wanted to change peoples view of me.
Claiming that I am an abuser,
And telling people I am a user.
You tell me to "say it to your face",
Yet you say you'll give me my space.
In a messaged dated on Facebook and signed,
Oh how very divine.....
I see now you're two faced and everything you called me,
everything you shouted from the tops of the trees.
Gimme a break crazy woman I cater to your son,
Yet I feel like it's over, I feel like it's done.
You and I were two peas in a pod,

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You chew me out and I just nod.
This won't go anywhere from here but south,
And lady that's because you have a BIG mouth!!!.
I'm standing below you all by my self,
So for now I put my heart on a shelf.
But one day you'll know I'm not a Con artist.
2-24-12

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April 2026
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15 years of membership
April 2021
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10 years of membership
April 2016
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5 years of membership
April 2012
13 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
09 Mon

Critiqued
"Woods Walker" by @Beauregard
"I like this. It reminds me of when I was little and I would go deep DEEP into the woods of abandoned acres mushroom hunting. I would often times get caught up in briers and thorn bushes and get one body part or another…"
March 2012
31 Sat

Received a critique
on My Good luck charm from @Starlight
"i liked it!! :)♥♥"
30 Fri

Received a critique
on My Good luck charm from @loved
"When in pain just think of me they all curse me yet I smile for I know that they do not know, yet they show they know so when in pain just SMS and I shall that lucky penny be for thee ..."
30 Fri

Received a critique
on My Good luck charm from @loved
"'tis too personal for many to relish as they tell me be impersonal or perish still I hope my views you'll cherish"
29 Thu

Received a critique
on My Good luck charm from @scribbler
"Some reason I'd think you'd break this up into 4 line stanzas................stan"
13 Tue

Critiqued
"brilliant flames" by @Starlight
"splendid Job you did on this one!!! Love it little sister. Keep up these wonderful writes, I look forward to each one."
05 Mon

Critiqued
"Rhythm Katana " by @Search
"I like this it tells a story. I have an idea though. When you start you poem do what I do now, Choose a certain number of words you plan on putting in each line and try to stay within one or two words less or more or th…"
February 2012
24 Fri

Received a critique
on Con Artist from @scribbler
"Did not have to be told to deduce this was about a mother in law. So the intent to convey a point was successful for me.........stan"
24 Fri

Received a critique
on Con Artist from @Candlewitch
"Defenitely a good angry rant stemming from personal wounding and hurts. the title fits. always cat"
24 Fri

Received a critique
on Con Artist from @emogothgirl
"that's right, stick it to the (wo)man! lol. but nice write. always, mag"
24 Fri

Posted a poem
Con Artist
"Con artist"
Open thread 21 lines
21 Tue

Received a critique
on Paraphernalia of Adultery from @Candlewitch
"very well stated! I'ts all been said before me. Please read my poem "Carnal Haven"? I think you will like it. always, Cat"
19 Sun

Critiqued
"seeing." by @Starlight
"My favorite line is "The way a roses thorn can be so piercing but the petals so brittle" You paint a beautiful image in the minds eye when writing, I like this a lot. I want to be able to see and feel what the writer di…"
19 Sun

Critiqued
"stress" by @Starlight
"I like this one a LOT!! And i totally feel you on the subject and content!! Nothing in this needs changed I love it!!! honestly. I feel we will get along very well together. Keep up the amazing work young lady. Sincerel…"
12 Sun

Critiqued
"Abstract View " by @Search
"Very beautiful I like this one best!!! Keep up the beautiful works"
12 Sun

Critiqued
"Word Machine " by @Search
"You asked me to read this and I like it alot actually. I think it would be better without the last line though. "lets kick ass" rest of it is great. and that's when I too write my best works."
January 2012
30 Mon

Posted a poem
Chaotic Christmas
"Hurry hurry rush rush,"
Open thread 46 lines
25 Wed

Most-discussed work
Chocolate

21 critiques to date.
25 Wed

Posted a poem
Chocolate
"With a robust smell that fills the air,"
Open thread 31 lines
17 Tue

Posted a poem
Paraphernalia of Adultery
"Baby, Don't think I didn't see,"
Open thread 50 lines
14 Sat

New follower
@Candlewitch
12 Thu

Posted a poem
Cat in the Dark
"She is like a cat in the dark,"
Open thread 23 lines
07 Sat

Critiqued
"Spent" by @lou
"When I read about the ashes, I can see them in my mind spinning and twirling in the wind. This is great writing when you can SEE and FEEL what the writer is saying. I love it. Brings back some memories with it as well…"
November 2011
17 Thu

Posted a poem
Grieving stalled
"I still have your number in my phone,"
Open thread 33 lines
02 Wed

First critique offered
on "For Cat" by @lou
01 Tue

Posted a poem
The Key To My Mind
"I no longer allow others to control me,"
Open thread 31 lines
August 2011
17 Wed

Posted a poem
Hooves Of Fire
"Have you ever felt the wind rush through your hair,"
Open thread 24 lines
06 Sat

Posted a poem
Let the sun shine :)
"Let the sun shine on your face,"
Open thread 16 lines
04 Thu

First publication
Ghost Train.
04 Thu

Posted a poem
Ghost Train.
"I hear a train whistle blowing about a half mile away,"
Open thread 42 lines
April 2011
13 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 113 days later.

About Me

About me

Hi my name is Nichole, I'm 31. I've been a member since I was a teenager. I had my first poem published when I was 14. I take to poetry as an outlet and a dedication to others.
Life has been a roller coaster. I am a mom of two beautiful girls. I love all things nature. Horseback riding. Nature walks. Mushroom hunting. Gardening. Swimming and hiking. I have two pet bunny rabbits, Archer and Launa. Archer is a mini lop. Launa is a lionhead.

Location: Somwhere over the rainbow, USA

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Workshops

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Expanding Your Perspective	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2011-08-31	Concluded

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"Woods Walker" by @Beauregard

on My Good luck charm from @Starlight

on My Good luck charm from @loved

on My Good luck charm from @loved

on My Good luck charm from @scribbler

"brilliant flames" by @Starlight

"Rhythm Katana " by @Search

on Con Artist from @scribbler

on Con Artist from @Candlewitch

on Con Artist from @emogothgirl

on Paraphernalia of Adultery from @Candlewitch

"seeing." by @Starlight

"stress" by @Starlight

"Abstract View " by @Search

"Word Machine " by @Search

"Spent" by @lou

on "For Cat" by @lou

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