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Neima laguerre
Member since November 14, 2020
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Addiction of choice
So called decision
Or is it hidden as gamble addiction
Role that dice decide away
At the mercy of a single answer
You against you
Or choice vs outcome
They say it’s luck some say wisdom
None the less I believe
Your choice determines the outcome
Or shall I say rolling the outcome
For surely it is like a game
Neima laguerre’s timeline
- November 2025
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14 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- November 2021
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14 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2020
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22 SunReceived a critique
on Addiction of choice from @Gracy
"Hello, I agree with Geezer. I'm not quite sure of your meaning in this poem. Maybe if you work on it a little it will become clearer. I also think that you must try as many times as possible before giving up. You have a…" -
14 SatReceived a critique
on Addiction of choice from @Geezer
"not quite sure of your intent here. I'm thinking that you are saying that the answer you get from the reader is going to determine your fate as a poet. I feel that your work has some merit, but you have to work at it, i…" -
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About me
Hi am neima am 13 but I really love poetry people find it weird cause of my age but I truly hope I am accepted here.
Location: Brooklyn ny
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