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Nathaniel Alden
Member since October 4, 2012
Member for 13 years, 8 months
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The Irony of Death
I am immortal in life.
I see all, live in tears
Thrive in fears.
I touch everything and everyone,
I am what you will become.
I follow your steps,
I wait in your home.
I am all.
I am nothing.
I will never die.
I am the shadow of your life.
I am forever.
Nathaniel Alden’s timeline
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One year of membership
- October 2012
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22 MonReceived a critique
on The Irony of Death from @Ian.T
"(I) think that the I's have it, apart from that third line. Now the theme is good but all those I's are just too much to take on this piece, I am sure it is positive but it becomes like a list as you read. Theme wise I…" -
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08 MonReceived a critique
on Loss from @scribbler
"Poetry doesn't have to rhyme to convey deep feelings as this poem does..................stan" -
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06 SatReceived a critique
on Et to Sam? from @Ian.T
"This just needs a tidy to me it appears scruffy but the theme is good and as Beau says in her comment (Which has two Clichés in) that the odd cliché is OK but there again it is a thing that will make you well known if l…" -
05 FriReceived a critique
on Did I Not Try Hard Enough? from @Proprietress of Crimson Hearts
"the first thing I saw in your revision was the honey streets, love that! now the beginning leads the reader into the poem, you don't have the abruptness of the harsh 't'. a thing I love doing is to put emphasis on recur…" -
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05 FriReceived a critique
on Did I Not Try Hard Enough? from @Proprietress of Crimson Hearts
"that is bothering you then you could try several different methods of organizing them. just copy your poem a few times and try to sort out the lines differently each time. as soon as you feel you've organized your thoug…" -
04 ThuFirst publication
Did I Not Try Hard Enough?
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04 ThuJoined Neopoet
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About Me
About me
I'm a music nerd and I love to write. I play just about anything I can get my hands on and home to major in music education.
Location: Missouri
Favorite Poets
Emily Dickinson
Edgar A.Poe
Ser Tankian
Otep Shamaya
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