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Mustafah
Member since October 16, 2024
Member for 1 year, 7 months
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Broken down like tempered glass,
our boys are young they out of class.
Ancient hours onto the hourglass,
we try to last, we can't resist,
how life treat us like a devious rapist.
Broken down like soft wool snow,
cold in his state but, through we grow
in faith inside the set apart place.
Defines forgiveness with holy grace.
When, days become, so short to narrow.
Dreams today get sold for, one sparrow.
Broken opportunities will not last
the seed in us, as it grow, so fast.
Dreams are broken like tempered glass.
Mustafah’s timeline
- March 2026
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27 FriNew follower
@Lavender
- October 2025
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16 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2024
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03 Sun
- October 2024
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29 Tue
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29 Tue
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22 TueReceived a critique
on Alone in time from @Candlewitch
"I hope I spelled your name correctly? (It is a handsome name) I found the lack of punctuation a wee bit disconcerting. Punctuation gives pauses and full stops in the poem. I find it helpful to read a poem out loud, befo…" -
21 Mon
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21 MonReceived a critique
on To see your face once more from @Lavender
"Hello, Mustafah, I feel the longing and the grief, but also the acceptance and peace in the final lines. Tender words from the heart. Thank you, and welcome to Neopoet. Lavender" -
20 SunNew follower
@Leslie
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20 SunReceived a critique
on To see your face once more from @Leslie
"What a sad and yet glorious rite. I loved the whole poem and the last three lines were the best, to me. Great job and good luck! Don't worry too much about neo, just do your own thing I think it's great! John" -
20 SunFirst publication
To see your face once more
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20 Sun
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16 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 4 days later.
About Me
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Location: South Africa
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