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musical prayers
Member since January 13, 2011
Member for 15 years, 4 months
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Silent and Still
There are many notes on my heart
scars, gallops, and pain.
Like a metronome you bested me,
Now acapella is in my name.
Little did I know
that a year from now
I would be on stage
and you on the prowl.
Wrapping me in your arms
you forgot to let me breathe.
That manly scented body
turned to jealous greed.
I no longer taste your lips
Now the table holds your band
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we could not serve together,
So I no longer serve a man.
Window to my heart
was open for all to see,
what lies deep within,
access: only God and family.
musical prayers’s timeline
- January 2026
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13 TueAnniversary
15 years of membership
- January 2021
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13 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- January 2016
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13 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- January 2012
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13 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2011
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03 WedReceived a critique
on Silent and Still from @Hooded Stranger
"MP, I am assuming you have contacted Andrew to see what can be retrieved from your previous profile on Neo before the crash? I hope you get it sorted - let me know if I can be of any help. regards, HS" -
02 TueReceived a critique
on Silent and Still from @Hooded Stranger
"MP, you comment says this isn't up for editing and you're done with posting on this site? So I wonder if it is worth me spending any time commenting on this one. I am left wondering why you posted it. Oh well, I'll move…" -
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- July 2011
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29 FriCritiqued
"Dandelions" by @Janice Pearce
"I like the poem the way you wrote it, the comments I agree with are the fact that I can feel myself as a girl blowing the white, and saved some is so deep, I bet you don't pollute and saved not only this memory, but thi…" - January 2011
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15 SatReceived a critique
on Innocence lost from @Eduardo Cruz
"Yes, that marvelous innocents, and now there so much truth in all we see that all we can do is hold on to things that first made us happy. not when youg but when we learn the truth of how we could servive it all. Living…" -
15 SatNew follower
@Janice Pearce
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15 SatReceived a critique
on Innocence lost from @Janice Pearce
"Patty, was missing you. Glad to see you back, wonderful poem!" -
15 SatReceived a critique
on Innocence lost from @scribbler
"welcome ! You have shown that rhyming poetry need not run on in length as so many of mine do. Well done..................scribbler" -
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15 SatFirst publication
Innocence lost
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15 SatCritiqued
"WINTERS DAY" by @Eduardo Cruz
"Liked the poem, snow looks like a million diamonds, laying on the ground, but when you grab them they melt like the dreams of rich men. Patty" -
15 SatFirst critique offered
on "WINTERS DAY" by @Eduardo Cruz
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13 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 2 days later.
About Me
About me
I sing and have 4 CD's out with the choir, Much money made for freeing children sold into slavery. I love to be on stage singing, went from making CD's to making a movie, not out yet.
Single and love it that way. I have three children and 4 grandchildren, I am very kind yet very stubborn! I have bent with people and their opinions I no longer bend, I snap. I really do
not care what anyone thinks of me except my dear family whom I love and trust. Stubborn with them too.
Location: Michigan, USA
Favorite Poets
Songs of Solomon
do not read much poetry
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