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mr joghe2
Member since March 1, 2026
Member for 3 months, 4 days
Thanks To My Old Shoes
My old shoes, my best friend.
They guard my feet from thorns and stumps
when I seek their laces.
My feet are warm as I visit their womb
To lodge for some moments.
They hold my ankles tight with care like a dearest friend.
My body is lifted up like fur in the air
To walk as a soldier in a battlefield.
On the streets, my old shoes are glad to sweep the beautiful roads,
With the greetings of coins falling into my calabash.
I am called a beggar
And nod to their requests.
My hope is in my old shoes
That take me around the streets.
mr joghe2’s timeline
- March 2026
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03 TueReceived a critique
on Thanks To My Old Shoes from @Clentin
"Interesting topic! Old shoes as part of our everyday life! Keep writing. Welcome to Neopoet" -
02 Mon
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02 MonReceived a critique
on Thanks To My Old Shoes from @Geezer
"the little trick of our language in the first line. A pair of shoes qualifies as a singular object, and in objectifying them as a friend makes two [or] a pair, a single. Weird huh? The second line is where it really get…" -
01 SunReceived a critique
on Thanks To My Old Shoes from @Sen99
"Hello A warm and heart felt tribute to footwear, so simple yet so essential : pair of shoes, keep walking." -
01 SunFirst publication
Thanks To My Old Shoes
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01 Sun
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01 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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