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mocha.mare
Member since February 9, 2021
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The First Poem
Everything seemed alright
I mean staring back at my empty papers, make it alright.
Wanting the papers to build like a Custer, so the words could build like a roller coaster
And coast it’s rails down the path we call hope.
Hope is our desire, our desire to do some so much more but not even be on key.
To be something that is much smarter than me.
To be something that kids look up to
To be someone you can’t even see yourself as
Isn’t that what you call hope?
mocha.mare’s timeline
- February 2026
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09 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- February 2022
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09 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2021
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11 ThuReceived a critique
on The First Poem from @chima ononogbu
"I bet you, soon, the pages of life will be filled with your great ink. Nice piece." -
09 TueReceived a critique
on The First Poem from @Lavender
"Hello, mocha.mare, Welcome to Neopoet! Intriguing poem - it feels as if those empty papers staring back at you will soon be filled with words expressing the desire to do more and be more, thus offering hope. I'm sure yo…" -
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About Me
About me
Hello, i am 15 and this is my poems. These poems are dark and deep, but they have a external meaning if you are able to understand the meanings.
Location: United States
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