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MLucas04
Member since July 10, 2026
Member for 11 days
Aeternus
The world shifts and moves forward,
As trained expectation turns into empty desire.
A familiar face in the window,
A bark as you open the mailbox.
As thoughts shift from normalcy to longing,
And black maggots worm their way in, whispering their terrible lies.
A man’s foolishness is the things taken for granted,
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The steps taken not thinking of what can be lost.
Focused so on his own life he forgets about the others,
The things held dear while life continues its ever forward march.
It’s dance into the unknown with you as it’s partner,
And a grip that won’t let go.
Do not let fade away from memory the pain,
The hurt that breaks you down.
As death leads to new life,
Loss leads to new strength.
Grit your teeth and battle through,
As heaven’s specters wait for you
MLucas04’s timeline
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10 FriReceived a critique
on Winters Trees from @Trouble
"I loved the way you laid this poem on paper it's something about the visual interaction with nature that's captivating a flower grows like love grows leaves fall just like feelings fall great poem Trouble" -
10 FriFirst publication
Winters Trees
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10 FriJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Always liked to write, mom sent me this so figured I’d give a a shot. From Wisconsin an In my twenties.
Location: USA
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