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Mit Havoc
Member since November 9, 2021
Member for 4 years, 8 months
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The Abyss
The Abyss is tame
I do not fear the abyss
And it does not fear me
Many times,
We drink whiskey together
And talk about old times
I've watched the abyss bury my friends
Such talent
Such remorse
One day the abyss will come for me
And I will welcome it with open arms
Mit Havoc’s timeline
- November 2022
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09 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2021
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11 ThuReceived a critique
on The Abyss from @Owl Has My Soul
"I agree with the above. Maybe experiment by only using the word abyss in the title. In the body use "it" or other references to really draw out the stark mood. I do think it is worthy of adding some more lines as well..." -
11 ThuReceived a critique
on The Abyss from @cathy mccormick
"i like this. i agree on not using word abyss so much. i would just use the word it. i would love to see you add lines maybe i stare at it it stares at me give a nod to nietzsche (sorry i know it is misspelled)" -
10 WedReceived a critique
on The Abyss from @c lynn brooks
"I am not a fan of using the word abyss so many times may I suggest something like line 2 I do not fear it I've watched that scoundrel bury etc etc otherwise not bad a warm Neo Poet welcome to you" -
10 Wed
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10 WedFirst publication
The Abyss
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10 Wed
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09 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Published author. Painter. Poet. Karate.
Location: QLD
Favorite Poets
Charles Bukoski
Edgar Allan Poe
Neil Gaiman
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