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Miss Macabre
Member since July 12, 2021
Member for 4 years, 10 months
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Passionate Inferno (Explicit Content)
As I lay beside you
The bonfire in my chest kindled
As our fingers brush and our palms meet
The blaze grew stronger
As our limbs entangled
Our faces draw closer
When our lips introduce themselves
The flames expanded
Our tongues meet and our desire grows
With my touch stroking your thigh
I could feel the ardor radiating from your skin
While I stroke your cheek
A fiery night full of passion arises
And the inferno consumes my heart.
Miss Macabre’s timeline
- July 2022
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12 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2021
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26 MonReceived a critique
on Crimson Squid of a Cimmerian Sea from @Midge
"That says it. Sorry. I Should Have Said That Says It, Shouldn't I?" -
26 Mon
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26 MonReceived a critique
on Passionate Inferno (Explicit Content) from @Midge
"Surely the 1st line should read "lie" not "lay"? The rest of the poem is ALL in the present tense so the 1st line should also be in the present tense." -
20 Tue
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15 ThuReceived a critique
on The Human Emotions from @Ray Whitaker
"I'm reminded of some lyrics from the band "Yes" off their Big Generator album. your use of imagery is to be admired" -
15 Thu
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14 WedReceived a critique
on A Jovian Revolution from @Geezer
"However, I will caution you against becoming to enamored of certain words. We used to have a person here; that used the color Cerulean blue, to excess, it got so that when I would scan their poems for those words and I…" -
14 WedReceived a critique
on A Jovian Revolution from @Geezer
"a real kick out of this! It is interesting to see how you see yourself in the "family dynamic". You seem to have a sense of humor and a way with words. I do believe that Cimmerian is properly spelled with a capital C as…" -
14 WedReceived a critique
on A Jovian Revolution from @Triskelion
"even the greatest poetry site this side of Uranus! Welcome again! Thomas" -
13 Tue
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12 MonReceived a critique
on Crimson Squid of a Cimmerian Sea from @Triskelion
"..welcome to the best poetry site this side of the Black Sea... Thomas" -
12 Mon
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12 MonFirst publication
The Carnal Dance of Two Flowers (since unpublished)
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12 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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Location: MI, USA
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