mercy the poetess

Member since January 14, 2026

Member for 4 months, 22 days

Death

Posted Jan 14, 2026 · 11 lines · 3 critiques

The grave holds unfinished dreams
As the world echoes with unpleasant screams
Loved ones forever gone
Leaving pain only
Many unspoken words and yet to be lived moments
Unforgettable memories and untold stories
Echoes of what could have been
Forever lost
Death understands one word "torment"
Confronting with what hurts most
"Loss"

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January 2026
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"I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the flow of it and it is quite relatable to life."
14 Wed

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on Death from @Geezer
"in the new member contest. Yeah, I get where you were going in this one. I agree with the A.I. on the line of [unpleasant screams] You have a powerful poem here, but the syntax is a little wobbly throughout. A few small…"
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Posted: 14 January, 2026

Updated: 17 January, 2026

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