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Marv45
Member since January 17, 2019
Member for 7 years, 4 months
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Alone
Today I sat alone by my window
And watched the snow fall on the ground
I looked at your pictures
I listened to your songs
But Today I sat alone.
My heart breaks deep down inside
Cause I’m wishing you were by my side
My thoughts they reach out to you
My tears cleanse my sole
But Today I sat alone.
I have your beautiful memories
But I feel so alone
My heart breaks deep down inside
My tears cleanse my sole
But Today I sat alone.
Marv45’s timeline
- January 2024
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5 years of membership
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- May 2019
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24 FriNew follower
@Eulekia
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01 WedReceived a critique
on Alone from @themoonman
"Well for one thing, count the times the word "alone" is used ... makes the impact less explosive. The second and third stanza say pretty much the same thing, take us there with you. The first stanza is really good (subj…" - January 2019
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21 MonReceived a critique
on Alone from @themoonman
"Welcome to the site! Thank you for sharing your poem, a subject many will resonate with ... loss is part of the human experience but that doesn't make it easy. Your poem could be improved but I think you could just let…" -
21 MonFirst publication
Alone
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17 ThuJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 4 days later.
About Me
About me
I'm 73 years of age man and now live by myself after losing my true love this last spring to cancer. I miss her so much. So I wrote a Poem.
Location: British Columbia
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| Cellar Door | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2019-03-27 | Concluded |