Eulekia

Member since July 25, 2017

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The Night Before Day Break

Posted Oct 13, 2023 · 9 lines · 3 critiques

The Night before Day Break
it was dark, so dark
The moon refused to give its light
A dark and Silent Sky
A Slight twinkling of star light
A cool breeze began to blow
Heralding the break of down
Soon it was twilight
And the day began to break

Eulekia’s timeline

October 2023
13 Fri

Received a critique
on The Night Before Day Break from @Geezer
"both counts, Triske. I understand the use of twilight, in this case, because the sun is just below the rim of the Earth. ~ Geezer. ."
13 Fri

Received a critique
on The Night Before Day Break from @Triskelion
"..your use of the word "twilight" because I had always thought of this being toward evening. On top of that, I also learned there are also three phases of twilight, so thanks for that. I like the general feel of your vo…"
13 Fri

Posted a poem
The Night Before Day Break
"The Night before Day Break"
Open thread 9 lines
July 2022
25 Mon

Anniversary
5 years of membership
October 2019
10 Thu

Received a critique
on Hope from @samary
"This is such an emotive subject that perhaps 5 lines is a little short. I would love to see how you bring comfort rather than being told I would love to feel the emotion of you holding out your hand. This has so many po…"
10 Thu

Posted a poem
Hope
"Faces brighten when I am near"
Open thread 5 lines
July 2019
23 Tue

Posted a poem
The gambler
"He came there every day"
Open thread 9 lines
July 2018
25 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
January 2018
10 Wed

First critique offered
on "HOPE (January Contest)" by @Simon
August 2017
15 Tue

First publication
The Rainbow
July 2017
25 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 21 days later.