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Manx Drako Blane
Member since June 26, 2022
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Cursed lullaby
The porch light comes on
She is not at home
Lost in a story of horrors untold
Passed down
Generation to Generation
Around the fire they shared
Tales of olde winters
Lullaby curse
A fisherman’s nightmare
his wife’s worst fear.
Adventures of freedom
Riches and gold
He buys wine and a boat
Prepares a crew
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Kissed his wife
Reminded his son to remember his place
Not knowing the fisherman’s fate
Lullaby of the cursed
Drift into deep
Siren songs of hypnotic sweet
Filling the heads of all men aboard
Blonde hair and blue eyes
Faces of Goddess
Hides sinister souls and a heart of darkness
Sick desire with deadly lust
Mind-blowing kisses unable to breathe
I find my siren queen.
Lullabies of the cursed rang out
Eighty years was how long she was able to wait
Held up by hope
Drinking to cope with being alone
Betrayals never known
Her deaf ears never able to hear
Curses sang by a Queen
The porch light is on
Hopefully;
Cursed souls find home
Manx Drako Blane’s timeline
- June 2023
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26 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2022
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08 FriReceived a critique
on Cursed lullaby from @Ray Whitaker
"A lot. The towards the end of it lines rang true to me the mosr: “ Eighty years was how long she was able to wait Held up by hope Drinking to cope with being alone.” My only suggestion to do would be to put a pause in p…" -
08 FriReceived a critique
on Cursed lullaby from @Jackweb
"and wondering, LULLABY CURSE!!! but couldn't catch up the whole scenario in the poem. The ambiguity of the poem allows several interpretations. I agree with the three above comments. I'm sorry, what ultimately makes a p…" -
08 FriReceived a critique
on Cursed lullaby from @RoseBlack
"There seems to be multiple stories going on. I get a sense of fisherman going out to make his living and perhaps for one reason or another he doesn't return. Or it seems said fisherman is lured by a lover, an affair in…" -
06 WedReceived a critique
on Cursed lullaby from @Candlewitch
"it starts out okay, but does not follow through. always, Cat" -
06 WedReceived a critique
on Cursed lullaby from @Geezer
"This is very difficult to read after the lines: "Lullaby curse", I don't get the connections between A fisherman's nightmare his wife's worst fear. Is my interpretation of this piece correct? I think that a person made…" -
06 WedReceived a critique
on Pain Made from @Candlewitch
"and *brightest of blessings, to you! *hugs, Cat" -
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02 SatReceived a critique
on Pain Made from @Candlewitch
"I see you are new to the Neopoet Community, you are very welcome here. your poem is very long, and some poets will not take the time to read the whole thing. so don't be upset if you have few responses. I don't know wha…" -
01 FriFirst publication
Pain Made
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01 Fri
- June 2022
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26 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 6 days later.
About Me
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writer and dark poet loves nature and tarot enjoy playing with my pitbull nyx
Location: USA
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