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Maelove069
Member since December 21, 2022
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A Game You Won't Win
You think you've broke me,
I got news for you i won't crack
You think i'm at my weakest,
You haven't seen nothing yet
I'm so tired of all of your games
One day you've disappeared,
The next you're reclaiming your fame
You were the one person that was there,
Gone in a blink of an eye,
Its obvious you had little to no care
So please just leave me be,
Let me set these broken pieces of eternity free
Please stop saying what you think I want to hear,
When two days later you're only going to disappear
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I've spent so much time building up this wall
Never in a million years will I ever let you tear it down
When all is said and done,
Being left with your ashes is not something I would call fun
Pick a different place,
Honey you will not win this race
Maelove069’s timeline
- December 2023
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21 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2022
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26 MonReceived a critique
on A Game You Won't Win from @Candlewitch
"welcome to Neopoet, it is nice to meet you! your poem is forceful and stands on its own legs. it is a declaration that you have drawn a line in the sand, saying; Here, And No Further! I like it very much. I hope to see…" -
23 FriReceived a critique
on A Game You Won't Win from @Ray Whitaker
"I am looking forward to reading more of yiur work, in future!" -
22 ThuReceived a critique
on A Game You Won't Win from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Powerful writing always comes from a place inside and it’s difficult to share or articulate those feelings. Writing is an excellent way to quantify emotions and explore the cause behind thought and behavior patterns. I’…" -
21 WedFirst publication
A Game You Won't Win
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21 WedJoined Neopoet
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About Me
About me
I love to write and draw. Music and poetry are my two passions.
Location: USA
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