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Mom’s Smiles (COMPOSED BY Lovedly) Inspiration Contest
Mom’s Smiles (COMPOSED BY Lovedly) Inspiration Contest
Very sentimental poetry
I recall my mom’s last eyes
no tears
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away
it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I my mom can see
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smiling with me
It does no longer rain
now it only snows
heaven knows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming
I smile back and ask
Are you still waiting for me
INSPIRED Inspiration Contest
Loveliest Poem ''Mom’s Smiles''
My MOM’S SMILES
is my Classic poem
so many have praised it
beyond sky levels
do make it a point to read it
You also have moms lovely
She still comes to me daily
smiles really and earnestly
and says
Son I am still waiting for you
but take your time
I aren’t in no hurry
Though here there is no worry
The Lord looks after us absolutely
really earnestly
like you my son did religiously
But meeting you
will be my universal desire
fulfilled in entire
and continue to post more poetry
reading you son is really lovely.
Yes she passed away
almost more than fifty years
gone Times’ lonely path way
No one has come
to for ever stay
we all shall also pass away
but love to for as long stay
you too old poets may
lovedone’s timeline
- May 2024
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28 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2021
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22 FriReceived a critique
on LEAD GENTLY INTO THE NIGHT from @lovedly
"A poem for a Virgin who was always afraid of a man was married and taken away to a far off land she had none of her trusted ones at hand thus I spoke Lead kindly into the night with hubby aright be faithful all night an…" - May 2020
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28 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2019
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19 WedReceived a critique
on Mom’s Smiles (COMPOSED BY Lovedly) Inspiration Contest from @friend
"only lovedly is valid please as per adm" -
15 SatReceived a critique
on Mom’s Smiles (COMPOSED BY Lovedly) Inspiration Contest from @scribbler
"I never expected anybody to use one of their own poems for inspiration lol. BTW you need to put (inspiration contest) next to title or risk DQ" -
15 SatHighest posting month
June 2019 — 5 poems
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14 FriPosted a poem
Mom’s Smiles (COMPOSED BY Lovedly) Inspiration Contest
"Mom’s Smiles (COMPOSED BY Lovedly) Inspiration Contest" -
14 FriCritiqued
"A PAUSE FOR SNOW (inspired writes contest)" by @scribbler
"enamours me I may compose similarly but not for june sytan" -
14 FriCritiqued
"Hororscope Birth Chart " by @zebra
"hororized I thought twas well done zebra one all stripped now compose one on a saggy with gemini opp guys" -
14 Fri
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13 ThuCritiqued
"Ignorance and Stupidity Abound" by @Pugilist
"some one loves would imply one is living won't it one who lived and loved would make me feel intelligent kindly educate me many not only call me naive but stupidly silly otherwise good is your poetry" -
12 WedReceived a critique
on Drifting Away from @Eumolpus
"it might have been written by Sappho 3 thousand years ago, or Horace or Petronius, or in mideveal times of the Carmina Burana, or a troubadour. But it's written by you and has a bit of your mark on it. It is perhaps the…" -
12 Wed
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12 WedCritiqued
"When I Think Of Death (June Contest)" by @coosh1
"reminds me of my poem ON NEO MOM'S SMILES BEST poem then Technically side line Perhaps I could repost it NOW LOVEDONE THEN LOVEDLY" -
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11 TueReceived a critique
on Of Happiness from @tyro
"quite an inspiring poem Lovedone, we all have our different views on happiness. I did like your go on happiness very much. I will remember thee when that Lord alone is besides me then happy you will also be for me a bea…" -
10 MonReceived a critique
on LEAD GENTLY INTO THE NIGHT from @Eumolpus
"like Dylan Thomas, as poets we must seek them out and enjoy their mastery. To be a poet is read poetry. I am so happy to have gotten your interest in him, and if you need a list of 15 or 20 "must read" poets from our ti…" -
09 Sun
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09 SunCritiqued
"LEAD GENTLY INTO THE NIGHT)" by @lovedly
"visit modern countries and see how many gals are crying holding unknown's babies so many don't know are they crying in English or Chiinkneeze and how to feed these" -
08 SatReceived a critique
on LEAD GENTLY INTO THE NIGHT from @Sparrow 42
"I find this one a wee bit sexist and having no respect for the women of this world especially those who are forced or coerced into going abroad to find that they are there to marry someone they have never met . Yours as…" -
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02 Sun
- May 2019
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28 TueFirst critique offered
on "EVERYBODY'S STRANGER" by @scribbler
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28 TueJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- January 2009
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23 FriFirst publication
JERUSALEM
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23 Fri
About Me
About me
As of June 15, 2019, this account has been blocked. This user is now active at www.neopoet.com/lovedly
oldy poet
Location: canada
Recent Work
Drifting Away
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Of Happiness
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LEAD GENTLY INTO THE NIGHT
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Just for Tonight
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JERUSALEM
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