Loreli

Member since July 12, 2010

Member for 16 years

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20 Poems

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Liar

Posted Apr 9, 2014 · 21 lines · 13 critiques

You aren't here
Strong arms to hold me
are absent.
So I wear your shirt
as my comfort.
I am not a part
of your world
though you are here in mine
your presence always
constant in my mind.
I like to say
I'm not waiting for you.
I like to say
I'm not hurting for you.

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I like to say
I'm your friend and it's okay.
I'm a liar
in the worst way.
I am consumed by love
for only you.

Lorelei

Loreli’s timeline

July 2025
11 Fri

Anniversary
15 years of membership
July 2020
11 Sat

Anniversary
10 years of membership
July 2015
11 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
April 2014
13 Sun

Received a critique
on Soul Assassin from @alidzain
"Love this poem. Good job. Alid"
13 Sun

Received a critique
on Liar from @Esker
"i see my poems now...there should be a comma behind honest.. i was expecting the poem to just describe betrayal a closure and pain..ache and the angst.. but instead the honesty.. the love the want the longing \i listen…"
13 Sun

Received a critique
on Liar from @Esker
"its like a beginning.. like me daydreaming out the window on the bus watching everything but not focused..not there.. then seeing something that draws me slow like a roller coaster peak .. what? what? moment... i like t…"
13 Sun

Received a critique
on Liar from @alidzain
"What can I say? To me this piece reminds me of my past when I had a failed relationship. Outside I'm telling myself I'm fine but I was a wreck inside. When I read this, its a very accurate description of that time in my…"
09 Wed

Received a critique
on Liar from @Ian.T
"Put the shirt on inside out and walk ion the fresh breeze it will let the memories flow away and then you can start off with a new day. There are so many like spirits out there they will be known to you if only you woul…"
09 Wed

Critiqued
"A liar - that's me." by @Samaira
"Thanks for pointing it out to me :-) Funny how we can lie to ourselves so effectively..... Cheers, Lori"
09 Wed

Received a critique
on Liar from @raj
"Welcome back! It's so good to see you again after a pretty long lay off. Neopoet site crashing for a while once again has sort of been like a blessing in disguise because I see many members who have been silent come bac…"
09 Wed

Received a critique
on Liar from @raj
"Hey! it's so good to see you back and posting your poem. Like others have said before me i too liked the honest expression of feelings....please keep posting... Regards,"
09 Wed

Received a critique
on Liar from @Samaira
"This just reminded me of one of my works here: "A Liar - that's me" so I HAD to let you know :-) I love the honest feel in this little write up. Cheers, S."
09 Wed

Critiqued
"TOMORROW" by @Geremia
"This is an accurate description of how I have been feeling since entering into my 50's! Oblivious to time and moments of my life until now, when I am staring at fleeting time in the face! This seemed to speak directly t…"
09 Wed

Posted a poem
Liar
"You aren't here"
Open thread 21 lines
May 2012
08 Tue

Posted a poem
Soul Assassin
"Purposefully striding forward"
Open thread 19 lines
April 2012
25 Wed

Critiqued
"Autumn Afternoon (from prose to poetry workshop)" by @Candlewitch
"peaceful places of pleasure as I accept this gift of nature serenity is mine ....my favorite lines (as this is how I often feel walking in the woods by my home). Nice job Cat. :) L."
August 2011
27 Sat

Critiqued
"Before Dusk Settles" by @raj
"This had me spellbound...so descriptive! Lovely and romantic. Made my morning to read this! Cheers, Lori"
27 Sat

Critiqued
"Guess who? (for a bit of fun)" by @raj
"Even if it is not correct...lol...still love the poem! Cheers, Lori"
26 Fri

Critiqued
"Broken Wing" by @xena465
"I like that, it has a good ring to it! Cheers and Hugs, Lori"
25 Thu

Critiqued
"Broken Wing" by @xena465
"Rosi, look up Train and Martina McBride singing "Broken Wing". The similarities are uncanny! Just shows that great minds think alike.... I loved this one and thought you did a great job telling the story. I love this pa…"
25 Thu

Critiqued
"Insanity " by @Rhiannon1010
"I was interested and I was hoping for more!! Cheers, Lori"
25 Thu

Posted a poem
Soft Whirlwind
"Feels like a soft whirlwind"
Open thread 16 lines
24 Wed

Posted a poem
The Facade
"Chiseled by hand, formed to be alluring"
Open thread 19 lines
13 Sat

Posted a poem
Longing to Leave
"I long to disappear"
Open thread 10 lines
July 2011
22 Fri

Posted a poem
Sanctuary
"Watching, spying"
Open thread 37 lines
11 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2011
10 Fri

New follower
@faithmairee
April 2011
22 Fri

Posted a poem
Slow Fade
"Wistfully I watch her"
Open thread 17 lines
08 Fri

New follower
@vexations10
07 Thu

Posted a poem
Lemonade Breeze
"Evening sighs"
Open thread 12 lines
March 2011
12 Sat

New follower
@franny50
December 2010
30 Thu

New follower
@loved
30 Thu

Posted a poem
How to Purr
"I want to learn how to purr"
Open thread 13 lines
29 Wed

Most-discussed work
Insomnia

22 critiques to date.
29 Wed

Posted a poem
Insomnia
"craving your kiss"
Open thread 5 lines
16 Thu

Posted a poem
Against the Wind
"Small birds gather outside my window"
Open thread 12 lines
15 Wed

Highest posting month
December 2010 — 8 poems
10 Fri

Posted a poem
From Where it all Comes
""Muse I""
Open thread 22 lines
July 2010
15 Thu

First critique offered
on "i love you madly" by @faithmairee
14 Wed

First publication
Superficial Things
11 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 3 days later.