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Licia Daniels
Member since March 7, 2011
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VOICES IN MY HEAD (2 stanzas added)
The voices in my head spake thus:
"Pray heed a word from all of us
should what we prate to you make sense
as host we deem you somewhat dense
'Tis folly to believe we're real
to banish us would be ideal
we're products of your fantasy,
your own authentic fallacy
We're sexless; neither gents nor dames
and so we have no need of names.
as playmates we have little worth
we're in your head, not on your earth
Engage us not in dialogue
stick to one-sided monologue
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our sole aim is to multiply
we're occupied, hence no reply
We find you're too inquisitive
and may we say insensitive
to eavesdrop, as you are inclined
(pardon the pun) where you've no mind
And now, dear host, we beg of thee
for some degree of privacy
scant your right to our domain
seek elsewhere to be entertained."
Licia Daniels’s timeline
- March 2026
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07 SatAnniversary
15 years of membership
- March 2021
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07 SunAnniversary
10 years of membership
- March 2016
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07 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2012
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07 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2011
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06 TueCritiqued
"Bhangalore" by @ephraimcrud
"Bang galore indeed!! Good one, you master word-crafter, you. Are you ever serious? Your no. 1 groupie Licia :X:X:X:X:X" -
06 TueCritiqued
"random access" by @ephraimcrud
"Funny as hell and an easy read, Eph. Faultless rhythm-and-rhyme, to boot. I like the way you effortlessly move from one topic to the next without losing a stride. Muchly love Licia :X:X:X:X:X" - June 2011
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09 ThuReceived a critique
on PIRATE MISERY from @Geezer
"a good time was had by all! I liked the pirate speak. No fault to find! ~ Gee" -
07 TueCritiqued
"i don't believe in fish anymore" by @ephraimcrud
"My first ever comment to you, which I fortunately saved: You used prawn guts diced up and cut praying for a nibble the fish joked ‘round “What’s with this clown feeding us this drivel we may be slippery downright scaly…" - April 2011
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18 MonCritiqued
"Adam's House Of Horror's" by @mand
"Bravo to this polished piece, Mand. I enjoyed this write. Love Licia XXXX" -
16 SatCritiqued
"a bit on the inside" by @ephraimcrud
"I love it when you talk dirty. Lots of love Licia :X:X:X" -
16 Sat
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15 FriCritiqued
"Negative Blood II" by @ephraimcrud
"Sorry for sounding impatient, but we're waiting for the sequel with bated breath. I need a good laugh to lift the spirits. Love and hugs Licia :X:X:X:X:X" -
13 WedCritiqued
"Just for the record" by @ephraimcrud
"Mr Funny Man, you've got the gift. it hasn't got a needle!' -but i sure felt a prick. Hahaha. Good one. Muuuuchly love Licia :X:X:X:X:X" - March 2011
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28 MonReceived a critique
on Simply Diana from @Roscoe Lane
"Welcome Diana, your poem is superb. Regards Roscoe.." -
28 MonReceived a critique
on Simply Diana from @raj
"great rhythm and humor spiced up this write for me....Neopoet needs humorous writes ..eases the tension here which at times gets too tight..." -
27 SunReceived a critique
on Simply Diana from @magics02
"How are you and I have read you before and I am laughing galore at this poem. I liked the way you fit and twisted your own comedian self into this write. I know I have read you and I am happy to read you once again. Thi…" -
23 WedReceived a critique
on VOICES IN MY HEAD (2 stanzas added) from @Nordic cloud
"Lilted along with the song of your pen and then, I liked it too so, good for you. Love Ann of Norway" -
23 WedReceived a critique
on VOICES IN MY HEAD (2 stanzas added) from @scribbler
"My voices are split. I liked this,no I didn't,very funny end, except it wasn't,can relate to this, but not Me. Enjoyed by all of us lol.............scribbler" -
23 Wed
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16 WedReceived a critique
on Simply Diana from @weirdelf
"and today's a maze [is contrated] and today is a maze" -
15 TueReceived a critique
on Simply Diana from @weirdelf
"coupled with warm self-deprecating humour. Just two things to comment on the lines yesterday is a haze and today's a maze the contraction on today's spoils the scansion a bit and is un-necessary, I think and content wis…" -
15 TueFirst critique offered
on "PLEASANT EVENING" by @scribbler
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14 MonFirst publication
Simply Diana (since unpublished)
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07 MonJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 7 days later.
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