Liberty Rayne

Member since February 5, 2020

Member for 6 years, 4 months

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beauty

Posted Dec 2, 2020 · 10 lines · 2 critiques

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and I promise youll always have my eye.
Out of sight out of mind isn't always true,
whenever we are apart
my mind always wanders back to you
Don't ever stop looking at me
with eyes that remind me of bamboo
healing in nature,
yet they always make me fall through
I hope you always think im beautiful
even when you realized you bit off more then you could chew.

Liberty Rayne’s timeline

February 2025
05 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2021
05 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
December 2020
02 Wed

Received a critique
on beauty from @lovedly
"*Beauty is in the eye of the beholder *Out of sight out of mind otherwise nice poem o young one"
02 Wed

Received a critique
on beauty from @Geezer
"to see you again! This is a great poem to come back with. I kind of think that you should even up the lines to make it more pleasing to the eye, and make sure that you use puncuation and watch your tenses. [Realized] sh…"
02 Wed

Posted a poem
beauty
"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and I promise youll always have my eye."
Open thread 10 lines
August 2020
17 Mon

Received a critique
on Desire from @Gracy
"Hi Liberty, it's the first time I've read any of your poetry. If you're new here, then welcome to Neopoet family. I'm fairly new, as well. I'll peek at your profile now. As others have said, you've deftly put a lot in f…"
15 Sat

Posted a poem
Jeckyl & Hyde
"I feel one with the wind"
Open thread 15 lines
March 2020
30 Mon

Posted a poem
H.A.
"Hazel eyes, bright smile."
Open thread 12 lines
February 2020
05 Wed

First critique offered
on "Salvage the Mind" by @Unlight
05 Wed

First publication
The monster in my nightmares
05 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.