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Liberty Rayne
Member since February 5, 2020
Member for 6 years, 4 months
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beauty
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and I promise youll always have my eye.
Out of sight out of mind isn't always true,
whenever we are apart
my mind always wanders back to you
Don't ever stop looking at me
with eyes that remind me of bamboo
healing in nature,
yet they always make me fall through
I hope you always think im beautiful
even when you realized you bit off more then you could chew.
Liberty Rayne’s timeline
- February 2025
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05 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- February 2021
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05 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- December 2020
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- August 2020
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17 Mon
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16 SunReceived a critique
on The monster in my nightmares from @Geezer
"that if anyone should have picked up on it, it should have been the doctors. Sometimes, people put so much faith in the doctors and hospitals that they don't think about whatever else might be wrong. They just go along…" -
16 SunReceived a critique
on The monster in my nightmares from @Adrien Brook
"Wow, I'm very sorry for what you went through. More than I can say. It absolutely wasn't your fault, and I hope someday you can heal enough to be okay. I know it's sort of empty to say stuff like that, but I genuinely m…" -
16 SunReceived a critique
on Desire from @Adrien Brook
"This is really clear and concise. Impressive that you managed to do that in just the four verses. And the words are really beautiful. They have a really nice sound together. Very poetic!" -
16 SunReceived a critique
on H.A. from @Adrien Brook
"Wowww. I'm really impressed by the juxtaposed metaphors. 'Poison apple' and 'candied apple'. I find allusions to fairy tales a bit over-done often, but I think this originality really redeemed it for me. And on top of t…" -
16 SunReceived a critique
on Jeckyl & Hyde from @Adrien Brook
"Wow!!! This is really fascinating! I assume you have DID! I'm sorry for your struggles... You've depicted it really well here. One piece of advice I have is that the end sort of loses its flow a bit. I think you should…" -
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- March 2020
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30 MonNew follower
@lovedly
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30 Mon
- February 2020
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15 Sat
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05 Wed
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05 WedFirst critique offered
on "Salvage the Mind" by @Unlight
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05 WedFirst publication
The monster in my nightmares
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05 Wed
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05 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
An aspiring young writer trying to share her voice with the world ✍️
Location: East Coast, USA, USA
Favorite Poets
Robert Frost
William Shakespeare
Emily Dickinson
Edgar Allen Poe
Maya Angelou.
Recent Work
beauty
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Jeckyl & Hyde
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H.A.
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Desire
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The monster in my nightmares
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