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Laura M
Member since April 2, 2020
Member for 6 years, 2 months
Angel Wings
People said she held a gift
Of something soft and gentle
Of natural nurturing
Her life was the rough
She lived in the dust
Until one day someone said to her
She has a gift
Atlas the gift was discovered and onward the gift pursued.
As it grew, lucky children would get a sprinkle of her gift. Although for some, only a particle. She was unsure of how to pursue this gift.
As the nurture was nurtured, using this gift, the first baby birds were randomly picked up. And how lucky they were. They were experiencing the warmth of being huddled under her long angelic wing as she flew for a while. And until the next group of birds…
There was so much love that was pouring out of her.
Always vibrant
And never-ending.
It made her a special kind of human.
Laura M’s timeline
- April 2025
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02 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- August 2022
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29 Mon
- April 2021
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02 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2020
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03 FriReceived a critique
on That's Heaven for Me from @Geezer
"I hope that I didn't give you too much critique for your first poem her. I think you will do very well. Take your time and learn from what you see here and you will have the advantage of having a community that cares ab…" -
02 ThuReceived a critique
on That's Heaven for Me from @Geezer
"you could change it up a little and say; "You can just sit there and watch"? It makes it a bit more personal for the reader. Which is what I think you are trying to do with this piece. A sleight breeze doesn't seem to b…" -
02 ThuFirst publication
That's Heaven for Me
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02 Thu
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02 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Location: Bay of Plenty, New Zealand
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