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keegs
Member since March 4, 2023
Member for 3 years, 3 months
how times have changed
Oh how times have changed.
In the years of the past
we could say just about anything that came to mind,
If that happened today itd be considered a social crime.
You can chalk it up to the new gen being sensitive.
Because they really don't know what building character is.
Sure it wasn’t pitch perfect,
But acknowledge the plain gist,
that making fun was the only way to change the narrative,
Of the negative connotation that the world thought was so imperative.
We hold more anger in our hearts,
From wounds that tear our worlds apart,
Than we can even comprehend
Its like we can never truly be friends,
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With our neighbors
But we need them.
From any stand point that you see
I need you and you need me
We make this world keep going round
With our teamwork we can make us proud
Proud to be a human race
who solved the oldest case
Of the crime that we invented
We’ll solve how to prevent it.
keegs’s timeline
- March 2024
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04 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2023
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07 TueReceived a critique
on how times have changed from @Jackweb
"the last two comments. Prose poetry never give the quality of what poetry should be. The poetic qualities such as heightened imagery and emotional effects were not found. . Good write though! ." -
06 MonReceived a critique
on how times have changed from @Seren
"I have to say I agree with one specific part of this you have to be so careful how you phrase things these days. I'll acknowledge there was ignorance and racism in some speak from days gone by but even general chat thes…" -
06 MonReceived a critique
on how times have changed from @Rosewood Apothecary
"Let’s start with the poetry…not bad. A bit loose and I think as you write and read more you’ll find yourself looking to say things with fewer words and also more interesting ones. You’re in your way to being a really go…" -
04 SatFirst publication
how times have changed
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04 Sat
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04 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
i am just an at home thinker who likes to type out her inner thoughts so they can leave her head.
Location: Texas
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