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Julesers
Member since September 10, 2023
Member for 2 years, 8 months
Cigarettes and heaven
We fight, we beg and plead for gran
To quit that habit and live a long life span
America's future nurses we heard all the risk of cancer
She either lies or smiles and doesn't give us an answer
Later she says she’ll quit for sure
At the same time she lights it behind the balcony door
The smell of smoke rids the air you can see the look in her face
Nana is still smokin in her favorite place
The grandkids are angry, feel helpless, and betrayed
Nana keeps lying about the habit that she made
We know if it continues, it’ll be too late
And her life will be shorten by her own mistake
Nana please don't lie, the reaper said health is on the line
If you want to live to see your grandkids grow up fine
You can't keep this a secret, it's not right?
Listen to your grandkids, kill that cigarette tonight
Julesers’s timeline
- September 2024
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10 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2023
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10 SunReceived a critique
on Cigarettes and heaven from @Geezer
"of Gran. Please don't be too hard on her, it's likely that she has had a lifetime of smoking. I started when I was 12 years old. Back then, if you could reach the counter with the money, they would give them to you. "Yo…" -
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