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Jude Kyrie.
Member since November 20, 2018
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In the rain
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In the rain
Do you remember my darling
we were just children way back then.
we played in the summer rain.
Dancing in puddles.
Splashing in colored rubber boots.
Drenched with happiness
in the summer rain.
I think that's when
I first fell in love with you.
I knew even back then
we would marry one day.
Remember we always
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loved walking in the rain.
The olive green days
of our life my love.
You, Me, the rain.
Then when the sickness came
you tried to hide it from me.
but I knew ...I knew.....I Knew……
It was too strong for the
rain to wash away.
I remember that last day
my love.
you asked me is it raining?
I said yes my love.
It's rained all day.
Take me outside you whispered.
Dance with me in the rain
just one last time.
I carried you out to the garden
we danced in the rain.
Now when I feel
lonely and sad.
and missing you is just
too hard for me to bear.
I stand in the pouring rain
and I can feel you close to me.
And the gentle pure rain
washes away my tears.
Jude Kyrie.’s timeline
- November 2023
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20 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- November 2019
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20 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- November 2018
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23 Fri
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21 WedReceived a critique
on In the rain from @IRiz
"Dear Judy, What a pleasure to read your poem. Colorful and bright in the beginning it takes the reader into the depth of grief and perhaps acceptance. It is vivid, kind, sad, and honest write. Boots, rain, dancing, depa…" -
20 TueReceived a critique
on In the rain from @chevyvent
"Would i trade the words to stand alone, and be a poet whose words stand in stone Would i trade words to keep me in verse and rythme For all time Would i trade the words to flip sonnet and lyre on the toss of a dime Yes…" -
20 TueFirst publication
In the rain
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20 TueJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I have been writing for a few years now
Usually emotional romantic
Not really a poetmore an interpreter of emotions.
Location: Toronto canada
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