Jokerface82

Member since December 11, 2021

Member for 4 years, 5 months

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109 Poems

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PINNACLE , SUMMIT

Posted Aug 27, 2025 · 14 lines · 1 critiques

I look out at the complex, rugged
forms that arise from the repeated
scaled erosion and weathering
complicated just as in life reforming
and starting again. Still standing with
confidence all depending on its
strength and it's weakness

Jagged peaks, valleys, and rough
surfaces with uneven edges. Steep
slopes bathed in natural nature. Pointed
summit spearing Into the wind chilled
steel-blue sky with a spray of clouds
in a soft snow-white hovering of
blankets.

Jokerface82’s timeline

August 2025
27 Wed

Posted a poem
PINNACLE , SUMMIT
"I look out at the complex, rugged"
Open thread 14 lines
26 Tue

Received a critique
on HUNTING JAWS from @Lavender
"Hello, Joker! Very creative! 50 years? Wow! I felt the eerieness here, the silence in the dark water and the creating of the boat. I wonder if a hyphen in man munching might be appreciated? My first read led me to envis…"
24 Sun

Posted a poem
HUNTING JAWS
"Captain Reel peeled back"
Open thread 43 lines
06 Wed

Received a critique
on THE FOURTH STEP from @Clentin
"Interesting poem. I needed to read several times. Liked it!"
04 Mon

Posted a poem
THE FOURTH STEP
"John's sapped waxen"
Open thread 42 lines
July 2025
22 Tue

Received a critique
on Lost from @Clentin
"Interesting poem. I liked these lines: But I can still see the ship in the thickness ? how have they... vanished? They were in spitting distance."
17 Thu

Received a critique
on ENVENOMED WITCH from @Ruby Lord
"I see 6, maybe 7? Could be just me? Ruby xx"
14 Mon

Posted a poem
PRIVATE COMPANION
"The pen felt"
Open thread 18 lines
13 Sun

Posted a poem
THE MIDTOWN SLASHER
"The Morose - black crows"
Open thread 54 lines
12 Sat

Critiqued
"Summer's Endless Battle." by @Alex Tanner
"Hope she's OK"
12 Sat

Critiqued
"The Uninvited" by @BlueSkies
"Well done you should smash this"
10 Thu

Received a critique
on FITTING IN from @Geezer
"I think that the A.I. has it right, except for the expansion of concept. I understood the concept very well. ~ Geez. ."
10 Thu

Received a critique
on FATAL DECEPTION from @Geezer
"set to read the rest of the chapter, when... I think you can guess what I was about to say? This doesn't really track as a poem. I think it could be, but it needs a little poem-master touch. ~ Geez. ."
10 Thu

Posted a poem
FATAL DECEPTION
"It was easier for him"
Open thread 55 lines
10 Thu

Received a critique
on ENVENOMED WITCH from @Ruby Lord
"Hi Jokerface, your poem has promise and I like its macabre tale. I think you're metaphors feel a little overloaded at times? Perhaps you're trying too hard to get your imagery across? And this part, needs looking at aga…"
09 Wed

Posted a poem
FITTING IN
"Walking around in meat suit,"
Open thread 17 lines
08 Tue

New follower
@Shantie Moyo
07 Mon

Posted a poem
ENVENOMED WITCH
"He smiled and winked"
Open thread 30 lines
07 Mon

New follower
@Clentin
04 Fri

Posted a poem
Lost
"A scratchy distorted"
Open thread 40 lines
03 Thu

Critiqued
"Mother" by @mark
"Well done"
02 Wed

Posting milestone
100 poems posted
02 Wed

Posted a poem
MINDSET
"I walked an identical path with"
Open thread 40 lines
June 2025
30 Mon

Contest commendation
06/25 Doctor is Bored During Surgery

with "Dr God ".
30 Mon

Contest commendation
06/25 Time Machine

with "Ron's Time Machine ".
26 Thu

Critiqued
"Woke Up On Another Era" by @Shantie Moyo
"I like this, but I disagree with you arnt posting for attention we all are"
26 Thu

Received a critique
on Dr God from @Clentin
"Good Good poem., chilly, reminds me of what I see in CSI!"
14 Sat

Critiqued
"June’s Garden" by @Rosewood Apothecary
"Love the personification and metaphor"
12 Thu

Posted a poem
WRONGFUL STREETS
"Lights flashing red blue"
Open thread 24 lines
11 Wed

Posted a poem
Trust
"Blackness, cold, know"
Open thread 10 lines
04 Wed

Critiqued
"Wood-smoke" by @Candlewitch
"Congratulations!"
04 Wed

New follower
@Geezer
April 2025
13 Sun

Critiqued
"The Body as a Canvas" by @Ruby Lord
"Great poem and imagery!"
12 Sat

Contest commendation
Neopoet Weekly 04/06/25 to 04/12/25

with "Fill my eyes with stars".
07 Mon

Critiqued
"Evolution of a Shadow" by @Punkyfrewster
"my shadow was tired and squat from the day."
December 2024
31 Tue

Contest commendation
12/24 Delayed On Christmas Eve

with "Cancelled ".
September 2024
28 Sat

Contest commendation
Neopoet Weekly 09/22/24 to 09/28/24

with "THE WRATHFUL SEA".
22 Sun

New follower
@LilacsandLace
21 Sat

Contest commendation
Nepoet Weekly 09/15/24 to 09/21/24

with "GRANDIOSE MAJESTIC MOUNTAIN ".
April 2024
30 Tue

Contest commendation
April 2024 Neo Gem

with "SPRING CHILL".
March 2024
09 Sat

Contest commendation
Neopoet Weekly 03/03/24 to 03/09/24

with "THE LAST RING ".
December 2023
15 Fri

Highest posting month
December 2023 — 18 poems
02 Sat

Contest commendation
Neopoem Of The Week November 26th 2023 to December 2nd 2023

with "THE MIRROR OF SECRETS ".
02 Sat

First contest commendation
Neopoem Of The Week November 26th 2023 to December 2nd 2023

with the poem "THE MIRROR OF SECRETS ".
December 2022
11 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
December 2021
23 Thu

Most-discussed work
GRANDMA'S FIXING IN THE KITCHEN

18 critiques to date.
13 Mon

First critique offered
on "Under The Mistletoe... [December Random Challenge #10]" by @Geezer
11 Sat

First publication
I'M DONE OLDER FORGOTTEN
11 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.