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Jul 02, 2025
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Mother
She rode the southern winds,
set down in the north
on Azaleas once again,
warms little buds as
they scream in their birth
and spring into blooms
-colorful bursts.
Delights for all
beholding landscapes.
Now she's off in a cloud
with the seeds of love
wooooosh
to love you true.
(and she does with a passion)
She weeps tears of youth,
makes rainbows scenic.
Warms your heart
you’ll know she is there.
Adorned with bouquets
...this banquet is for you.
— mark, Jul 02, 2025
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Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
Jokerface82
1 year ago
I like this Mark
Well done
Geezer
1 year ago
A vivid...
description of Mother Nature in Springtime! ~ Geez.
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