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J.D.Kennedy
Member since January 14, 2022
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Tinnitus
Tinnitus chants more
music through doorways,
drafting feathers
distort the ear spine,
shaping uproars,
shifting the sand-
castles where silence
cradles wordlessness.
J.D.Kennedy’s timeline
- January 2023
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14 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2022
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21 FriReceived a critique
on Tinnitus from @Ray Whitaker
"It seems there are six different Fornyrðislag styles in Old Norse poems. I’m wondering which you are emulating. Congrats on a nice piece, and congrats on attempting to write in a thousand year old style. It likely makes…" -
16 SunReceived a critique
on Tinnitus from @Race_9togo
"I like the title, You language use is generally good, The cadence is good, I can relate; tinnitis is an old enemy. Beginning and ending are good, and you stay on track with the poem and meaning, staying within the param…" -
14 FriReceived a critique
on Tinnitus from @scribbler
"Tinnitus..... I have mild case of it from the thunder of guns and cacophony of construction over the years.Those last 2 lines... I'd write "where silence once cradled wordlessness" because there is no more silence." -
14 Fri
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14 FriFirst publication
Tinnitus
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14 FriJoined Neopoet
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About Me
About me
Miniaturist, Artist and Poet, Huge fan of Seamus Heaney, William Blake...
www.jedika.com
Location: New South Wales Australia
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